Last night was really bad. we slept with our eyes open in case of another attack. We woke up to a blow to the face. We started swinging left to right punching, choking kicking. Then when it all stopped we saw jack and two hunters jogging down the beach with Piggy's glasses in Jack's hands. Those thieves! They stole the only thing we had to make fire. That was a low thing . We would of given them fire if they asked. How are we going to make fire now. At least it gives us a reason not to collect wood. That is hard work. But now there is no way we can have fire. We will surly freeze to death. And poor piggy is completely blind now. We need to get those glasses back or come to some agreement or something.
Hey Ralph
Hey Sam and Eric
We gotta get those glasses back
we know
freshing up make us look clean you know like we are doing ok.
Ok.
After we freshen up we head up to castle rock. As we walk i shiver. I'm very afraid to come near jack and his hunters. We pass by were Simon was killed. We felt our stomach drop and looked at each other funny. As we got closer we could feel that something was about to happen. We were holding up piggy as we walked. When we got close enough we could see castle rock. We saw some hunters with sharp spears. We walked on to a narrow walk way. Were greeted by little Roger. He says
Who goes there!
You know who it is were is Jack, said Ralph
He isn't here. Then jack and his hunters arrived. We were dead silent.
Give us back Piggy's specs
Never, what you going to do about it.
THATS Not RIGHT! yelled piggy
please give them back Its the right thing to do! he whimpered
Your nothing but a thief! yelled Ralph
Jack attacked Ralph They swung punches striking each other in the face. Jack tried to stab Ralph but Ralph jumped out of the way. we were afraid for our live but we stood still and watched. The a Huge rock comes down the hill and gets piggy in the stomach and sent him flying. Our jaws dropped. Then he hit the edge of a rock and his brains fell out. we were taken prisoner and roger was in charge of us. Ralph ran. Then Jack asked if we would join his tribe we refused and were prisoners.
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Hey.
I really like your blog. You did a very good job with putting every thing in from the chapter. You add very good detail too.
I like this paragraph. You add good deatil.
"We pass by were Simon was killed. We felt our stomach drop and looked at each other funny. As we got closer we could feel that soething was about to happen. We were holding up piggy as we walked. When we got close enough we could see caslte rock. We saw some hunters with sharp spears. We walked on to a narrow walk way. "
you need some spell cheak because in the first sentence you spealed something wrong. But I really like your story it is very interesting.
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