Friday, April 4, 2008
blog 7
Ohh today was a bad day i was so tired. When we had started to head up the mountain it seemed infinite amount of climbing to get to the fire. Just looking at Ralph is so infuriating he think he is so good, but Jack is the best leader ever. Finally we had got to the fire. We saw the beast and our mouths where blundered by the site of it and we could only stumble our words. Then the beast looked straight at us and we decided to go covered rate under the mountainside. When we looked at the beast it we could not tell what it was and we could not agree on what it could be. It was an uncompromising situation. We compromised by saying its a Ape-like creator. When we got back to camp all of the little boys were looking at us in fear. We deiced to tell them that the beast was a Ape-like creator. They started to sniveled in fear a lot when we told them. But the littluns still wanted us to share our sagely advice with them about the beast and what it did when we got there, but we did not tell them.
Thursday, April 3, 2008
blog 5
My feelings differ from the time of the day as I lay upon this bay. From morning sunlight to the nights darkness I change. The morning light wakes all the animals. Birds chirpping, hunting for food. The weather cold like ice. The wind and all the trees were calm, only a cold chill came down my back. Walking down the beach the ocean was raging and the waves were high and huge. The high tide during the morning and the low tide at night. When the night comes the tide goes low and every thing calms down. The ocean goes from its raging waves to the little small waves. The sand warm and bright in the day, then cold and dull at night. Everyone in the day is busy going to places and you hear the honking of cars and at night everyone goes home and turns off the lights. When it rains its pouring down on earth, flooding the streets, when there thunder it roars when theres lighting it strikes burning what ever it hit. Then the sun comes out and brightens the city. The day passes by and it becomes more clearer. The rainbow crossing the sky with opalences colors. The clear sky were all you can see is just blue.
Wednesday, April 2, 2008
blog 3
I was running with my hunters with pigs. We left the fire and knew that if we left for a little and go hunting that nothing would have happend to the fire on the mountain. So me and my hunters left to find pigs and kill them. So we abonden the mountain and went into the deep part of the forest.Me and my hunters were on our way to the forest. We were on our way to the forest and we were cutting tendrils of vines with our barb spears. The wieght of of sun put a oppressive feeling upon me. There was a festoon of vines every were. The vines inscrutable wieght were makeing me and my huner tired. But we didnt stop because we wanted meat. The vines were very inscrutable they were very thick. I have my barbed sprear cutting through the bushes trees and plants. Me and my hunters were walking waiting for something to pop out and then out of no where a pig ran out of a bush. I was bewildered for a second then I realized that this was my chance to catch a pig. I chased the pig and then I slashed my spear at the pig and it started running away. We started run after it and it got away. It was through the glimmery bushed to the outside of the forest. We got went out were the pig ran off and we saw Ralph. I took a furtive look at Ralph then looked away to see if I could find the pig."What are you guys doing." Ralph asked." We were hunting pigs I almost got it." I fluantly."Why arent you guys building huts." Ralph said."We want meat and do you acctually think were going to get rescued? We should be hunting for pigs instead of building huts
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
Blog 10 sam and eric
Last night was really bad. we slept with our eyes open in case of another attack. We woke up to a blow to the face. We started swinging left to right punching, choking kicking. Then when it all stopped we saw jack and two hunters jogging down the beach with Piggy's glasses in Jack's hands. Those thieves! They stole the only thing we had to make fire. That was a low thing . We would of given them fire if they asked. How are we going to make fire now. At least it gives us a reason not to collect wood. That is hard work. But now there is no way we can have fire. We will surly freeze to death. And poor piggy is completely blind now. We need to get those glasses back or come to some agreement or something.
Hey Ralph
Hey Sam and Eric
We gotta get those glasses back
we know
freshing up make us look clean you know like we are doing ok.
Ok.
After we freshen up we head up to castle rock. As we walk i shiver. I'm very afraid to come near jack and his hunters. We pass by were Simon was killed. We felt our stomach drop and looked at each other funny. As we got closer we could feel that something was about to happen. We were holding up piggy as we walked. When we got close enough we could see castle rock. We saw some hunters with sharp spears. We walked on to a narrow walk way. Were greeted by little Roger. He says
Who goes there!
You know who it is were is Jack, said Ralph
He isn't here. Then jack and his hunters arrived. We were dead silent.
Give us back Piggy's specs
Never, what you going to do about it.
THATS Not RIGHT! yelled piggy
please give them back Its the right thing to do! he whimpered
Your nothing but a thief! yelled Ralph
Jack attacked Ralph They swung punches striking each other in the face. Jack tried to stab Ralph but Ralph jumped out of the way. we were afraid for our live but we stood still and watched. The a Huge rock comes down the hill and gets piggy in the stomach and sent him flying. Our jaws dropped. Then he hit the edge of a rock and his brains fell out. we were taken prisoner and roger was in charge of us. Ralph ran. Then Jack asked if we would join his tribe we refused and were prisoners.
Hey Ralph
Hey Sam and Eric
We gotta get those glasses back
we know
freshing up make us look clean you know like we are doing ok.
Ok.
After we freshen up we head up to castle rock. As we walk i shiver. I'm very afraid to come near jack and his hunters. We pass by were Simon was killed. We felt our stomach drop and looked at each other funny. As we got closer we could feel that something was about to happen. We were holding up piggy as we walked. When we got close enough we could see castle rock. We saw some hunters with sharp spears. We walked on to a narrow walk way. Were greeted by little Roger. He says
Who goes there!
You know who it is were is Jack, said Ralph
He isn't here. Then jack and his hunters arrived. We were dead silent.
Give us back Piggy's specs
Never, what you going to do about it.
THATS Not RIGHT! yelled piggy
please give them back Its the right thing to do! he whimpered
Your nothing but a thief! yelled Ralph
Jack attacked Ralph They swung punches striking each other in the face. Jack tried to stab Ralph but Ralph jumped out of the way. we were afraid for our live but we stood still and watched. The a Huge rock comes down the hill and gets piggy in the stomach and sent him flying. Our jaws dropped. Then he hit the edge of a rock and his brains fell out. we were taken prisoner and roger was in charge of us. Ralph ran. Then Jack asked if we would join his tribe we refused and were prisoners.
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Blog Promt 9 The stolen glasses
I was Walking down the beach. I remember what happen last night. The hunters brutally murdered Simon. I really want to talk about it but no one will listen. I think it was a accident. He had no reason tumbling down the mountain. They thought he was the beast. Scared a littlun. I really think it was his fault. Really scaring the littluns when every one is so tense and afraid of the beach. I heard the hunters were so afraid they started leaving part of their kill for the beast. I think the beast is out for us all. I wish my mom was here. She could take me home from this place. Now i am definitely not comfortable near jack and his hunters. Just thinking about it made me shudder.
Hello Ralph
Hey said Ralph
We need fire tell some one to get some get a fire going you know? Said Ralph
umm we don't have allot of people I said
Whose Left? said Ralph
Some littluns they are useless and Sam and Eric they aren't much help either... I said
Wow... Said jack I could see a disappointed and kid of afraid look in his eyes
But its ok.. We have something they don't have... FIRE said Ralph
You know they will come for it
yeah...
Hey piggy you know what happened last night he said
I tried not to think about it. But when i talked i started to gesticulate
It was a accident! Simon was dumb to frighten the boys during a rowdy Party!!! i said
Those savages murdered him... murder.
When he said the words i could feel the phosphorescence beating on my skin
Then Sam and Eric came over they were tired. They looked like they were about to fall out . They talked about the rain recently and how all the wood was wet. Very hard to make fires. They were tired of getting wood. The sun was going down and i was getting tired.
We all went to the shelters and fell asleep. About 2 hours later i heard a rumbling noise. I woke up and woke Ralph up too. Then i heard a voice... "Come here piggy!' I was frightened i thought it was the beast. Then i got a stifle punch the face and i fell over. Then came a smother of blows to the face and body. I lay ed on the floor i heard fighting. And a familiar voice. It was jacks. after the noise stoped i got up my eyes still closed i heard Ralph, Sam and Eric talking. They were talking about mt glaces but i didn't listen. I open my eyes and i was practically blind.
Hello Ralph
Hey said Ralph
We need fire tell some one to get some get a fire going you know? Said Ralph
umm we don't have allot of people I said
Whose Left? said Ralph
Some littluns they are useless and Sam and Eric they aren't much help either... I said
Wow... Said jack I could see a disappointed and kid of afraid look in his eyes
But its ok.. We have something they don't have... FIRE said Ralph
You know they will come for it
yeah...
Hey piggy you know what happened last night he said
I tried not to think about it. But when i talked i started to gesticulate
It was a accident! Simon was dumb to frighten the boys during a rowdy Party!!! i said
Those savages murdered him... murder.
When he said the words i could feel the phosphorescence beating on my skin
Then Sam and Eric came over they were tired. They looked like they were about to fall out . They talked about the rain recently and how all the wood was wet. Very hard to make fires. They were tired of getting wood. The sun was going down and i was getting tired.
We all went to the shelters and fell asleep. About 2 hours later i heard a rumbling noise. I woke up and woke Ralph up too. Then i heard a voice... "Come here piggy!' I was frightened i thought it was the beast. Then i got a stifle punch the face and i fell over. Then came a smother of blows to the face and body. I lay ed on the floor i heard fighting. And a familiar voice. It was jacks. after the noise stoped i got up my eyes still closed i heard Ralph, Sam and Eric talking. They were talking about mt glaces but i didn't listen. I open my eyes and i was practically blind.
Monday, February 25, 2008
Blog 8 the death
I broke out of my nature trance to the chants and noises of jacks hunters. And in front of me lay a giant pig. They jerked and stabed at it. They even shoved a stick up its butt. I was discusted by their savagry. They jabbed the pig corpse at a steadfast rate.Blood started to trickle down. It was horrible. I could only thinvk about the coruption in jacks brain.They talked about honnereing the beast. I think they wanted to leave it some of the kill. That will be a waste. I think the beast is not real. they are so dumb. Then they left. i came out from my hiding spot. I realized they had cut the head off the pig and put it on a stick. I staired into its blank eyes. Flies Started to appear on the pigs face. I mean alot of flies. it looked like a big black ball of little flies feasting on blood. Then the pig started talking. It explained about human nature , and also how evil everyone was. Then i slowly began to notice something about human nature. I noticed how any one can do something wrong such as muder or like torturing somthing. Its like imbeded into our heads. This pig head explained everything. First i thought it was the beast then it explained how we are the beast . at first i didnt understand. Then it came to me. There is a beast in all of us. Thats human nature! I then it told me if i left this place i would not be safe. I was thinking about leaving then i felt light headed and fell asleep. I decided to go look at the "beast" because now i know thats not the beast. As i walked up the hill i saw the wings, which actually looked like a parachute. as i got closer and closer, a stinch came up to my nose. I barfed on the floor. In front of me was a dead man. I took the parachute he had on off ass proof. They had thought this was the beast all this time i started on my way down the hill to what looked and sounded like a party. I could smell cooked pig. I stumbled into a circle they were in. Then a littlun yelled out BEASTIE! I felt tremulous. The crowd turned to me and attacked me and bit my ear off then it went black, i felt like i was dead.
Thursday, February 21, 2008
blog quest: Character profiles
Simon is different compared to the other boys. He like nature and is calm all the time. he dose not like to get involved with all the fights and arguments the other boys have. he is also generous and nice to the younger boys. He once got fruit from a tall try for them. He is a very unique character in this book.
Jack is not a good character. In the beginning when he wanted to be the leader of the boys but was not voted for. He is the leader of the choir boys they are now all hunters. He thinks that hunting pigs is more important then being rescued. Jack has become even more worse. He punched and slapped piggy and broke his glasses.
Ralph is the leader of the boys. He found the conch and they use the conch to have turns talking during meetings. Ralph came up with this idea. He made rules but jack dose not like them and abuses them. He still has hope that they will be rescued.
Piggy is like Ralph. He is called piggy because that is what they called him at home and Ralph told. He is not taken seriously because of the way he talks. He always whines so the boys don't like im that much. He and Ralph are the good people.
Jack is not a good character. In the beginning when he wanted to be the leader of the boys but was not voted for. He is the leader of the choir boys they are now all hunters. He thinks that hunting pigs is more important then being rescued. Jack has become even more worse. He punched and slapped piggy and broke his glasses.
Ralph is the leader of the boys. He found the conch and they use the conch to have turns talking during meetings. Ralph came up with this idea. He made rules but jack dose not like them and abuses them. He still has hope that they will be rescued.
Piggy is like Ralph. He is called piggy because that is what they called him at home and Ralph told. He is not taken seriously because of the way he talks. He always whines so the boys don't like im that much. He and Ralph are the good people.
Wednesday, February 13, 2008
Blog Quest 1
This picture represents that jack really dosent like piggy. He refuses to give him meat and lets every one else eat meat. I think piggy realized this too. Now i think that he fears jack. Jack does this for no reason at all. There is definatly tension between the two of them.
This picture represents brutality. They are beating on a young child. They start out playing then it gets out of hand. The chant kill the pig, slit her throat. They are just playing around but the are going back to regular human nature no society.
This picture represents brutality. They are beating on a young child. They start out playing then it gets out of hand. The chant kill the pig, slit her throat. They are just playing around but the are going back to regular human nature no society.
Wednesday, February 6, 2008
Blog 4
As i Look up in the sky there is a weird opalescence color. It was also hot i think i am seeing things. This morning i thought i saw a pool of water. I guess it was a mirage. Then i heard a slight whimper. I went into the bushes and found a littlun. He was happy because he had seen a ship and he pointed to the sea. I was delighted because there was a ship. But it was going right past our island. I looked up the hill and the fire was out. This was preposterous! Then comes jack and his hunters. i looked at him incredulously. Whats wrong with you! He did not know what to say so he started to talk about the hunt he just had done in irrelevence. His hunters Cheered and ran around their kill. They jumped and waved their spears in gyration. "A bout came by!" I said. "Ummm oops". "We needed meat so we can eat, or else we would starve". said jack. Well that was our ticket out of here! , Then i heared a loud of shrill sound. It made me jump. The pig was still alive and had just been killed by one of the hunters. Then we started to argue again. He gave me a very malevolent look that made me shiver all over. We arent ever going to be rescued anyways we are here for life. I think he had no implication of being rescued.
Tuesday, January 29, 2008
Blog 2
The crowd of kids were all gathering around and were talking about making a fire up on top of the mountain. I was thinking to myself, "If every body goes to the mountain to make a fire we will all go crazy and something bad might happen." The little one with a birth mark on his face, talked about a beastie in the forest. Every one was ignoring the little ones cries. I held the conch. I tried to talk to the group of kids but every one was talking about the fire that they will make. So, I tried to get their attention by yelling out to them. They walked nimbly towards the mountain top. On the way up to the mountain they saw many warped trees at the bottom.When they got to the top Jack sends the Hunters and little people to gather the wood. I felt officious when they got that wood. Once they had all the wood they needed Jack and Ralph asked if anyone had any matches with them.The group said, "No!" I started to get nervous and took off my glasses. I rubbed them on my shirt. When I rubbed them on my shirt they saw the light beaming from the glasses. Jack asked me if he could use my glasses and I looked at him scornfully. Jack took my glasses off of my face and I said, "Hey, those are my glasses! Give them back!"He just told me to that I just sat there and complained and to shut up. That gave me an irrestible feeling of anger. It was so hard not to just punch him in the face but I did not. The crowd of kids where all tumulting like wild beasties. When the fire ignited it went down to the dead trees. I suddenly thought of the little boy with the birth mark. He was missing.
Monday, January 28, 2008
Blog Promt one (the conch chapet)
We were escaping from Britain. Are country was at war and all kids were evacuated. We were in a plane flying over a island when i heard shots. The plane was being shot down and the kid next to me got shot in the arm and was crying. all us boys were freaking out. Then i felt huge drop in my stomach. We had crashed and i was out cold. I woke dizzy and hungry i had to clamber out of my seat and out of the burning plane. There was no one around me. I was afraid. Then far away i could vainly see what looked like a lagoon. I was dying of thirst so i quickly ran over there. On my way to the lagoon i was attacked by a HUGE pig. It stared at me and i was so frightened i started to quiver. Then it charged. Lucky i had a pocket knife on my and i stabbed its eye and it ran away and i was happy. Then i was met by a boy who was very decorous. When he started to talk to me i interposed and said " were are we". Then he answered with a strident voice. We are on a island and we are lost. Then i had to speculate of what happened. Now i could remember that we had crashed. Then i could hear what sounded like a clamor. we were approached by a group of boys in black. Then we heard a loud noise and the boys in black gowns followed it. We followed them. Then as we went onto the beach we Saw a fat kid and a skinny kid. They were both bog kids. They introduced them selves. Hi I am jack and this is piggy. We all laughed. Then we say the fat kid look in indignation. As i looked hat him his face was in a jumble and i could feel how he felt like. Like somthing is grating at him. He looked very pallor. They talked for a bit but i wasn't listenig. I could hear jack and ralf argue over who would be the leader.Then i came back from dosing off and i was asked to vote for jack of ralf. I voted Ralf because i had earliar heard him be mean to his chior adn i didnt like that. Our chosen leader ralf lead us into the forest were we devoured fruit and almost a pig!
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